Thursday, 4 June 2020
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I am a student at Campion College. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Nice slides and think you can get could grade.
ReplyDeleteVery Cool Ben, I'd like to see more
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Harley and I attend mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like your information about the box guitar and your drawing is really betail and perfited lines.
Great slides I'd really like to see more.
ReplyDeleteReal good luv to see your working
ReplyDeleteVery nice Ben! I think you have enough evidence of your learning because you have photos of your drawing and facts about the instrument you want to make and photos/ideas of your instrument
ReplyDeleteHi Ben, I have enjoyed looking through your portfolio, however I do not think that you have enough learning evidence. I think, to improve this, that you could add in some more information on box guitars on your planning slide. On my slideshow I have added all of my planning and reflection documents through links, maybe you could try this too. I liked your detailed pictures of your box guitar with all of your measurements.You must be nearly ready to go into the workshop. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteThat's very cool, better than mine :')
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